Tuesday, June 26, 2012
There, Their, and They're and their rightful uses
Essay Writing Tip for the Night
Good use of paragraph: "Fishing can be a great sport for Father and Son time. It gives them a chance to bond while waiting for that bite, and when that bite comes, gives them a chance to work together to bring in that catch! And you can make a whole day of it or even a weekend trip together."
Bad use of paragraph: "Fishing can be a great sport for Father and Son time. It seems like time flies by way too fast sometimes! Speaking of fast, this year is just flying by. I once saw a plane flying by the other day and it came pretty low to the ground! The ground really does supply us with everything we need to eat."
As you can see, in the first example, the body of the paragraph supports the first line of the paragraph, and doesn't deviate away from it, but explains WHY fishing is a good sport for Father and Son time. In the second example, the body has no support whatsosever of the first line, but deviates away, far away, from the subject even. And it will probably lose the reader as well.
I realize this is a simplified and humorous example, but nevertheless explains, in a simplified way, what the difference is. Hope it might even help! :)
Friday, June 22, 2012
Thursday Ramblings
Anyhoo, getting tired and probably should turn in. As a side note 'rant' I guess you can call it, I've been feeling a bit, ohh, disappointed is people lately, especially people I feel fond of. It just seems that regardless of the support and interest I show, it seems 'unwanted' or unwelcome. Not in a negative way, just...is. I'm always one for showing support and help and I do it anytime I can, with the resources and talents I possess. I feel certain people are either just too self-absorbed to recognize it and have a 'I can do it all' attitude, or just don't take the time at all to recognize it, or me, for that matter. That's when I have to step back and go "Okay, it's time to just step back or even let go, cause obviously this friendship or relationship is not moving forward and can't unless it's mutual. But don't stop helping, loving and showing support because, that's just who you are." But I always have hope that someday they will recognize that in me. We'll see I guess. I'm fine now, I'm not really one to sulk over it endlessly, especially when I take it to the Lord and just pray over it as well, and for them.
So that's my 'sob' story for tonight. lol At least I feel better tonight and not going to bed with a headache that I've had all day. I think it came on from working out in the sun all day doing a van install, possibly not getting enough water. Gotta watch that more carefully, especially with this blasted heat, now that it's Summer. Blah Can I just transfer to a cooler place until it's Fall? :)